Read the two sentence given below: • Films will continue to entice insecure teenagers who have been hypnotised by the glamour and the glamourous lifestyle of those associated with it and who dream of the money they would earn and adult-addicts for their love of the medium. • Films will continue to entice adult-addicts for their love to the medium and insecure teenagers who have been hypnotised by the glamour, who dream of money they would earn and the glamorous lifestyle of those associated with it. Teachers of ' Writing' would advise you to use the second sentence (or similar structures). Identify the option that properly explains the reasons for such a preference:
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A.
The second sentence moves down from 'adults' to 'teenagers', It follows, the right hierarchical order and reflects reality better.
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B.
Mercenary instincts alone cannot be the reason, and since personalised satisfaction is more important, the second sentence has the better sequence.
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C.
Love for medium is more important than glamour. The second sentence gets the order right.
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D.
Since the coordinated parts move from the shorter to the longer in the second sentence, a rhythmically more attractive line is created in the second sentence.
Correct Answer:
D. Since the coordinated parts move from the shorter to the longer in the second sentence, a rhythmically more attractive line is created in the second sentence.
Explanation:
Among the given options, option (d) properly explains the reasons for such a preference to advise to use the second sentence. Hence, option (d) is correct.
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